This is really good
and that is really like me(in a way)

Awesome poem. :D

I DID LIKE THIS POEM.SLEEP CAN BE THE ONE TIME WHEN LIFE IS SIMPLE !!!

Hey,
a beautiful poem but i must say that the flow was sometimes a little off, love the subject, i haven't read much poems about sleep =)
good work!
kisses stephanie

I loved this poem haha makes me look forward to my sleep time.. good job i rate it 5

Wow, great job on this piece. Its got an interesting rhyme scheme and a nice flow. You have penned something simple and odd yet well written. superb piece