This is a really good piece. It can really be identified with by many. I liked the flow it had, went very nicely. Seriously emotions were going through me. Like I said it's a very good piece. Awesome job!
5/5

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Hey sad poem!!! Hope its Not true!!!
Well done on the rhyming and flow, especially in the 3rd stanza.

In the 2cd line of the 2cd stanza, the there' should be there's

Well done
Love Mel

This like the second poem that I have read that has read the mind of all teenage girls and women. This is a very sad poem. But you truly have hit the nail on the head. Excellent write hun. I couldn't have wrote it better myself. 5/10

Letty

Dear, such a beautiful sad poem you potray here, writing well with beautiful emotions, yet the verse, so marvellous! keep them coming, it will help you. and i wish you have a great weekend, take care.

best wishes from west, bert. ~

Wow! I can relate to this one so much. I loved the flow of it. 5/5

Awww!! Its so sad!! I love the emotian you included in the poem... Its totally great!! Very deep. Keep it up!

Hey, I'm here to do as I said I would. Firstly, I just want to ask if you're alright. I know personally that poems show alot of truth about how the writer is feeling, and I just want to make sure you're ok. If you're not, I'm definately here for you. And if you are, then you're way too good at writing about pain lol. I really liked this poem, especially the beggining and counting tears. I can't believe nobody's put it into words like that before. It really did alot to pull me into your write. I hope you write lots more after this...And I wish you all the best.
-Stefhy-

Such sad words here.
Hope everythings gonna be alright.
You showed a lot of emotions which I know many out there can relate to this one.
5/5

Thats a nice poem! yet soo sad :(

somehow i can relate to this poem

"I lay in bed, counting my tears,
Each representing what I'd hoped would be years."

well, my friend, that is truly inspirational. you are a wonderful poet.

Another great poem u have here i really like it, i give u a 5/5

Ahh my dear poetess...you are amazing...lol...

i noticed ur msn name hope this poem isnt about that

im here for ya if u wanna chat...

5/5 yet again

But in my heart, I know this will never be,
For there' no longer a place in your heart for me.
I gave you my all, I gave you my heart,
Little did I know that you'd tear it apart.

^^ My Favorite Stanza... But You Forgot The (s) In There's... But It Was An Amazing Poem.... 5/5

*~*LoveLustTragedy*~*

I gave you a 4/5. The flow was not too great. It wasn't very well though out and planned. The imagery though was really good. It had a lot of meaning, and probably means something to you. Keep it up. =) 4/5 xoxo

Samantha

Good poem, the title caught my attention. I have a poem with the same title, but of a different genre. It's a good look on a different point of view. Nicely done.

Wow, you really put a lot of feelings in this poem, didn't you? Hehe. Loved it, it had a good flow and it was very strong when it came to your emotions. It was perfect, you're an amazing writer. 5/5

Stephanie

Wow, heartfelt and full of emotion,,, i love this one and all of the other ones ive read, it was a pleasure reading them..

You have a gift one I am grateful you share!!

This is one of the best poems i have read on here it is AMAZING! its so short and to the point but from the very first stanza i was already saying awww haha and also you don't specify who your talking about so its easy to relate to with any person in your life! great job i gave you a 5!

Aww... cute poem! I liked it! Thanks for it! It's a 5/5!!!
*just Lisa*