WOW! the poem you penned here, though sad but writing well with beautiful emotions......

Intense dark poem

Very good sad but i could see how you felt with just those few words in that poem i loved it keep it up

Another great poem here, u r the best

Dark, yet deep. very truthful and powerful. keep it up.
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Not as great as your 'I will always love you' but still a good poem... i think you could have rhymed that last bit... but everything else was perfect :) my fav stanza:
I cry myself to sleep at night,
Hoping that when I wake up,
All my pain will be gone,
But when I wake up,
I find more pain has come.
5/5

Woah, a very powefull and emotional poem. Excellent. I love everything about it. The whole poem is sad, and you wrote it very well. Keep it up. =] 5/5

This is good, many people on here can relate to it, you have so much talent at writing sad poems. x

I think we have the same feeligns.. 5/5

I thought that ur poem was really great, keep up the work 5/5

I really know how that feels and i've tried to end it many times but i just can't let go but i don't get it theres not much to let go of...anyways this poem is extremaly good..i love your first stanza
auna

Great poem! i like the rhyming scheme

Wow, great flow and rhythm... so well written... i truly enjoyed reading this keep it up