I really like this poem 5/5 .... thanks 4 the comments
xoxox

That's the sweetist poem ever. it has deep emotions and real love. the to last vers realy said something to me. keep writing:)

Its beautiful. Is it for your daughter or something?!?! If so I wish my father would love me this way.

Wow, I love it. I can totally relate to it. Very well written and cute. No, I couldn't think of another word for cute than adorable... but yeah... Definitely deserves 5/5 =]
Much Love,
Rayne xx

I like this poem. It has a lot of meaning behind it. There is one word spelt wrong mater is suppose to be matter....just thought i would fill you in. i like how much emotion that comes with. i have been there and i am sure a lot of people have. Keep up the good work

Beautiful.

Your right. No one can express true love no matter how hard they try. It's to special. But i'll keep trying as long as you do =)

5/5 for a beautiful poem!
*Gem*