City in the Clouds

by Weeping Wolf   Oct 8, 2006


Mystical eyes
staring in the the sky
there was such grace
in long strands of hair
and shadowed beauty
in the colors of skin
and a dream riding on
the beat of a heart.
the drop of a tear.

There was
a secret found.
There was
a city in the clouds.
There was
a promise in the sky.

as hands open
as eyes sparkle
as wings spread
as loneliness dies
she flies...
in the haven in the skies.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I love this, Layla.It has a surreal aspect to it.I like how you used rhyme in the last stanza, it works well.But it is your mastery of words and emotions that make this poem so alive and touching.

    Gary Jurechka

  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Great poem keep writing and ill keep reading. xxx so strong and so believable i was captured in the moment and got carried away reading it. That must have ment something :)

    please could you comment on some of my poems much appreciated xxx alex xxx

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