Great poem keep writing and ill keep reading. xxx so strong and so believable i was captured in the moment and got carried away reading it. That must have ment something :)

please could you comment on some of my poems much appreciated xxx alex xxx

I love this, Layla.It has a surreal aspect to it.I like how you used rhyme in the last stanza, it works well.But it is your mastery of words and emotions that make this poem so alive and touching.

Gary Jurechka