I love this-but it is more in prose style than poetic.I feel it can be broken into stanzas but yet feel just as strongly it is perfect as it is.But really, I think stanzas would make it stronger.Regardless it has a beautiful flow and pure ambience about it.Great piece

Peace, Poetry, & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Thank you for your helpful comment Gary. This was my first posting and posted it in haste. I did some editing and hope it reads more flowingly. I am glad you enjoyed it.