by Jessica Oct 8, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Floating on fluffy clouds in the bright purple sky |
by Jenni Marie
I thought this one was very good also, you have a lot of talent. |
That was a beautiful poem! i loved how u worded it and of course it flowed since the kind of poem it is, it has to. haha. i love how u write poetry that actually has a style and u dont just free form it. its really refreshing seeing a young writer actually take interest. great poem! 5/5 |
Another hard poem... you like challenges don't cha? Anyways nice poem my favorites lines are: |
Ooo. I like this poem a lot. I liked how you repeated a lot of the lines over again. It gave the poem a sort of depth. The flow was very good, and the rhymes were well done. =) 5/5 xoxo |
by X2892
Very great poem u have here i give u a 5/5 |