Hey Great poem, i Loved this One!!!!!!! well written, and again you've written another poem, which i can't find word for, Excellent poem, You are an amazing poet , keep it up.
Love Mel

The blood roses

This is such a thought provoking arrays of mysterious words finely knitted down into a poem.
This was truly a good read.

Keep on writing on what you feel and like Letty.

God Bless!

A truely great fantasy write like a sequal from the snow princess you should consider writing a fantasy novel

Love your poems
John
xxx

Wow this is really good. I like your imagry 5/5

Wow very deep and wonderful poem. lots of emotion in it and the flow was great. keep it up! 5/5

~Kristina

Great poem keep writing and ill keep reading. xxx so strong and so believable i was captured in the moment and got carried away reading it. That must have ment something :)

please could you comment on some of my poems much appreciated xxx alex xxx

Woah. Like the story of the poem.
You rock.
~Angel of Secrets~

Woah, that was amazing. I was kept interested the whole way through and it kept me wondering. I love that in a poem. You used clear language, and told a great story. A very interesting, unique write. Keep it up. =] Definately 5/5

Nice thoguht process; a rare concept. Third person viewpoint is too rare in dark poems. You have managed to put it well.

There are some suggestions:

You become one with them. Everything in your life takes on a change. It's like leaving a life of misery behind and stepping into a life of fame.

But you must make sure that the choice you make is sincere. Because you might find yourself drowning in their scarlet bed of blood with a heart thats been pierced.

I feel that the above two stanzas are conflicting. If they pull you against your will, how can you choose?

Also I think that you coould have bettered teh meaning of teh whole peom with punctuation, especially the following paragragh

All it takes to join the blood roses is a prick of the thumb. Your blood becomes one with all that has been pricked. (,) W(w)hich is an anonymous sum.

You can't turn back now. You can't change your mind, or you'll find yourself swimming in their blood eternity(; or -) that's for all time.

You then realize that you were chosen to be a pawn in the Devils game. You hate yourself deeply. Your(You are) now more depressed and ashamed.

OMG I LOVE THIS POEM!!!! Im adding you to my favorites! I love the last two stanzas... Your rhyming gave me chills and the story.... GAH I LOVE IT!
5/5!

I really enjoyed reading this poem. Great job. I tried really hard to try to understand what the scarlet blood roses symbolized. I interpreted them as people who fake love or intentionally break people's heart as a type of game. It is very beautifully written and it has great imagery. Great job, Letty.

~ Arsalan D.

WOW...another favourite of mine so far. I have nothing bad at all to say, i absolutely loved it!