New You

by Eli   Oct 8, 2006


Soft spoken and suaveness in the born given talent of classy.
Her soft exotic complexion, I canâ??t look away.
The sun ttattooedthe crust of her humble temple.
She won him over.

She pierced his mind with her words . She spoke of wonders with serenity. He was drawn in and I ccouldn'tlook away.
Goosebumps arose like the dead being resurrected.
The boy has her in mind all the time.
Thermometers bursted, her touch made him melt.
They cupped palms and glared into the eyes of one another.
It's time for the next step, but slow down.
The stare made them realize the answer.
The answer was not to be told, it was to be expressed in warm touch and kind words.
The boy got lost in her magnetic eyes.

He's never experienced what he feels.
Yet her care,touch, and words of wisdom pierced him.
His hopes that their attraction in body and mind will not cease to grow.

I am the boy and she won me over.

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  • 18 years ago

    by lexie

    Wow,that was soo passionate and beautiful.incredible poem!!
    thanks for the comment on "too young"..yeah sadly it was real.my friend jake drowned on august 10,just 17 yrs old.
    thanks so much for the comment,that poem means so much to me,nice to kno its still being read after a few months. =]
    --lexie

  • Oh
    my
    god

    that was friggin GORGEOUS. the words were, jesus christ they were AMAZING!!! this poem surpassed any i have ever read on this site! absolutely outstanding!

    and thanks for your comment on "Ash's Rape" i would have commented back sooner, but my internet was down.

    still, this piece was utterly the most beautiful thing i have ever read!

    [ashes]