Oh
my
god

that was friggin GORGEOUS. the words were, jesus christ they were AMAZING!!! this poem surpassed any i have ever read on this site! absolutely outstanding!

and thanks for your comment on "Ash's Rape" i would have commented back sooner, but my internet was down.

still, this piece was utterly the most beautiful thing i have ever read!

[ashes]

Wow,that was soo passionate and beautiful.incredible poem!!
thanks for the comment on "too young"..yeah sadly it was real.my friend jake drowned on august 10,just 17 yrs old.
thanks so much for the comment,that poem means so much to me,nice to kno its still being read after a few months. =]
--lexie