by Drew Oct 8, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
I pour my heart out to you do you even care. A laugh or two have you even heard anything that I`ve said. You call me a fool for confiding in you maybe this is all a joke to you.I`ll know better next time not to confide anything to you, have your laugh or two when I am gone no one will blame you. Your cold and heartless what else should I expect from someone like you. |
by amber
Wow...its sad... it makes me remember how my ex treated me... I mean he didn't laugh at me but he didn't really care abut me.. just acted like it and to methat's the same thing |
by Hurtingsoul
Ouch that hurt the last sentence. great poem and thanks for the comment i like reading your poems too |
Great poem keep writing and ill keep reading. xxx so strong and so believable i was captured in the moment and got carried away reading it. That must have ment something :) |