Comments : Dearly beloved...

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Very sad thoughts here.
    Youve have a way with writing.

    Keep on writing on what you feel and like

    God Bless!

  • 18 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Omigoodness!! I was intrigued by the title and figured I would read it. I loved the way you told the story through the eyes of the priest who is holding the funeral for the girl.. It is very sad. I really appreciate the comment you left me! Thanks!!
    Ciao < 3

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    A very sad poem...unusual rhyme scheme, but I got it. Nice job. Jpoet*