Song Of Plea.

by Wings Of Flames   Oct 8, 2006


The mermaid\'s tears are ever fresh,
Upon the burning seas,
They rise upon the surface,
Once for this song of plea,

\'Take us now we won\'t forgive,
As your hands cover my lips,
Each droplet of our vengeance,
In silence of this body\'s eclipse,\'

\'Our eyes are swollen in the darkness,
As we fold beneath your knees,
Another drop but now to sorrow,
Within time It starts to freeze,\'

\'Where art thou stranger in the night,
As I wake neath thy sheet,
After the crimson rain has fallen,
With a throb in each heartbeat,\'

\'The dove\'s wings are cut,
And they bleed in the sea,
This is the end of life,
After our final plea.\'

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  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Wow. This poem was amazing and nothing short of.

    "The mermaid's tears are ever fresh,
    Upon the burning seas"

    You have quite the imagination there. I really liked this poem. It was very well written. 5/5 =]

    -Jenna.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I discovered something today. Most of your lines are great, i.e.
    'Where art thou stranger in the night', but when they become stanzas, is where I think the problem lies. You've got to believe me, I don't like sading bad things about your's, or any other person's works, especially when they're so nice about mine. I think I may have already said that, but I wanted to re-say it. One thing that I really like about your poems though, is that you always use good, creative words. Your vocabulary is truly unfaultable.

    Brad

    P.S. It's probably a good thing that I stopped anyway.

    P.P.S. Thanks for voting on my poems love.

    P.P.P.S. How do you spell your name? Sometimes it's Emma, and sometimes its Emah.

    P.P.P.P.S. I write 'Our secret place' after reading the first stanza of 'Live'. So thanks.

  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Great poem keep writing and ill keep reading. xxx so strong and so believable i was captured in the moment and got carried away reading it. That must have ment something :)

    please could you comment on some of my poems much appreciated xxx alex xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    This is bad.
    :S

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