Wow. This is really a good poem, and I like it alot. I love the sentence; "But now my heart is failing because the truth really hurts."
Very true.
~Angel of Secrets~

"So I live each day one day at a time and I just let nature take its course."
-Very well said, I couldnt agree more...

The over all feel of the poem is very thought provoking.
5/5

couldnt wait for your next poems.. =)

god bless!

A very inteligent piece. I think its all very true, and i believe the same thing. I love everything about it. Excellent realistic write. Keep it up. =] 5/5

I really did love this poem. Full of strength and emotion that came through beautifully. It is true that the truth hurts, and its nice to believe in those fairy tales until you find out about the truth. But nevertheless, fairy tales do come in little bits and pieces in this world.
Anyways, I thought you did a great job, keep it up! 5/5
--emily

Wonderful..... just keep up the good work5/5

Wow, you have so much talent! Again i have nothing bad to say, everything about this was excellent.