Unperfect Girl

by The Angel of Secrets   Oct 8, 2006


She walks the path from a home that's broken,
Remembers the small things that was never spoken.
At school she's perfect and she smiles every day,
But then she comes home and the smile fades away.
At home she is forgotten, cause they don't even care,
They don't even notice, completely unaware.
Every night in bed, they can't hear her cry,
No one will notice, never ask why.
But now it can't be fixed, it is all to late,
She doesn't even care, she thinks its her fate.
The words that she needs to hear, will be left unspoken,
It won't even help, she is already broken.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    The words that she needs to hear, will be left unspoken,-my favorite line. It isn't bad, but it is so short. I like the topic an the ending it was good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    I love the way u write, i can totally relate to everything. this is really sad, but it's the truth, a lot of people feel this way... great job!! 5/5!

    Forever*Yours

  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I loved this one it was my fav of yours so far it made me feel sorri 4 this character it was well written xxx alex xxx (4)

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    Unfortunately, i can relate to this. Not all the time, but enough for this poem to really hit me. A sad, but great write. I'll be sure to read more. You have heaps of talent. =] 5/5

    Tammie

  • 18 years ago

    by bluecrush

    This really touched me this poem
    very good poem :)

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