Comments : Our love

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "I remember that night
    the stars were crying
    the night we ended our love
    all love was dying"

    What an opening stanza that was!! It was excellent especially tha part about the stars crying.
    It really set the tone for the rest of the poem. So bittersweet
    5/5
    *Gem*

    (Thankyou for the kind comment x)