Awesome penned, writing well with beautiful emotions...yet the ryhme was great, well done!

Wow great job on this poem. very wonderfuly written. the flow and rhyme was amazing. keep it up! 5/5

~Kristina

I am impressed by such a unique rhyme scheme-far from cliche, and it has such meaning.I am quite impressed with your talent.This is short and to the point, very eloquently expressed.I love the final stanza.

Peace, Poetry, & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Sorry to be rude, but i am just letting you know that i wont be commenting back on your poems, as you left me a mindless oneliner, which could apply to any poem, with no proof that you actually read my poem and actually tried or wanted to help me improve..

~Murder.

La la la!! i tink this is good! and i gave it a 5! blah..blah...blah! soz bout the lame comment but i can't think of anything else to put! your poems are really good though!

Never ever give up writing!

5/5. GREAT POEM! I loved the rhyming.

Great poem 5/5

Great Job!!! this is so wonderfully written...u use words that so amazingly fit together, your poetry is also unique! its not what i usually come across which makes it even more special....def keep up the good work! if u could comment on my poems i'd appreciate it
andi

Undoubtedly a five here, great job again. One suggestion: "My mute mind meditates as I begin to think
Passion in me needs to be preserved in ink

The rhythm moves me, and I flow with the vibe
Adding order to the words I choose to scribe"
I think the rhythm of this section would be perfect if it was instead:
"My mute mind meditates as I begin to think
All of the passion in me must be preserved in ink

The rhythm moves me all around, and I flow with the vibe
Adding order to each of the words that I will choose to scribe"

The rest is awesome. Nice work.