This poem i really like. But have you ever seen a red sun in the morning? I know about the symbolic meaning, refering to the end of life. And this is the main theme engaging the I narrator

Great use of symbolism.

Great poem keep writing and ill keep reading. xxx so strong and so believable i was captured in the moment and got carried away reading it. That must have meant something :)

please could you comment on some of my poems much appreciated xxx alex xxx

Sorry that i use a comment on your poem, but you have one of mine...girlie goo uses copy & paste for her comments. Bad behavior