Predators.

by ASPHYXIATED   Oct 8, 2006


Predators stalk and slaughter their prey,
When the sun's sleeping and in the light of day,
They drain the blood as their fangs sink beneath,
The flesh enjoyed as bone hits teeth.
Predators need warm blood as fuel,
Their needle like teeth, their murdering tool,
They pierce in their fangs and kill from within,
Then their flesh feast solemnly does begin.

Sparing no victims they kill to survive,
Destroying their prey allows them to thrive,
Blood soaken, fulfilled they stand tall and proud,
Cautious yet fearless of the trespassers around,
Aggressively pouncing on their mid day snack,
Predators kill in an unprovoked attack,
Kings of their homeland, Fierce and cruel,
Over their homeland, predators rule.

The animal in humans is hidden by culture;
We're all predators.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    It was a different style of topic.
    But you penned it very well.
    I loved it.
    5/5
    Lovce you. xx
    -Heater

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Great poem! It is very unique and I definately enjoyed reading it---Every aspect of it's perfect except the flow was a little off here:

    "Kings of their homeland, Fierce and cruel,
    Over their homeland, predators rule."
    It caught me off guard with 'homeland' used in both lines...

    5/5 keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrew

    Great, it just flows great and paints a great mental picture

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This peice is amazingly written, you're description and vocab are brilliant really clearly expressing the content. well written

  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Great poem keep writing and ill keep reading. xxx so strong and so believable i was captured in the moment and got carried away reading it. That must have ment something :)

    please could you comment on some of my poems much appreciated xxx alex xxx

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