Take that chance

by Brittany C   Oct 8, 2006


You think you'll give him a chance,
To take your wounded heart in his hands and heal it,
You trust him enough to allow him to do that much,
You'll give him a chance,
At becoming your only one,
He has some things in common with you,
Things that are important to you,
That gives him a steep up on the others,
He's not like other guys,
And he never tries to control you,
Or tell you that you are wrong,
Unlike the others,
Maybe that is what you need,
Someone who has complete confidence in you,
When you don't have confidence in yourself,
He has confidence in who you are,
He's someone you can be yourself around,
You never had that before,
Yes he's what you need,
So take that chance,
And give your heart to him,
And see if things will work out.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is my favourite, I was smiling when I read it.
    So true and meaningful and so sweet.
    You have a lot of talent.

  • 18 years ago

    by ALEX

    Woww.. this is my favorite one so far!

  • 18 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Very emotional and from the heart. I liked very much. Again though, a few mistakes -

    "He has somethings in common with you,"

    It should be "He has some things in common with you,"

    "When you don't have confidence in your self,"

    'Yourself' is all one word. =]

    Good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Chris Rodriguez

    An emotional write that truely comes from the heart. Everybody needs somebody. Great poem.