Can we make it?

by Mass Murder   Oct 8, 2006


Were fighting a war
will our love win?
Can we pull through this,
all over again?

I thought I felt heartbreak once before
but the thought of losing you
hurts even more
I'm not soppose to talk to you
my dad says were over
but how can I leave you
with this kind of closure?

I need your right now
to wipe the tears from my face
Its hard to stand on my own
no one can ever fill in your place

Your my everything
my land, sky, and sea
if only you knew you mean to world to me
Baby is this goodbye, is this the end?
Or will your fight this with me again?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    Awesoem poem, the rythm could be better, but other than that it's great

  • 18 years ago

    by 888Trinity888

    I was also in a similar situation. Plz keep trying because my relationship worked out and my parents finally (sort-of) came around. It was the best decision I made-never give up someone you love. luv, Trinity

  • 18 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Awww thats cute i like that and i know how you feel my dad is the same way but its ok i got through it and im sure you will to good luck and good job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Great poem keep writing and ill keep reading. xxx

    please could you comment on some of my poems much appreciated xxx alex xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by hannah

    This really spoke to me. See I know how you feel it seems like a situation I've been in before.

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