This really spoke to me. See I know how you feel it seems like a situation I've been in before.

Great poem keep writing and ill keep reading. xxx

please could you comment on some of my poems much appreciated xxx alex xxx

Awww thats cute i like that and i know how you feel my dad is the same way but its ok i got through it and im sure you will to good luck and good job 5/5

I was also in a similar situation. Plz keep trying because my relationship worked out and my parents finally (sort-of) came around. It was the best decision I made-never give up someone you love. luv, Trinity

Awesoem poem, the rythm could be better, but other than that it's great