by Morggie Oct 8, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Sweets, the candy whom everyone adores. |
by mo_gan
That is a great poem! I love how you use emotion! |
by Chris W.
Very good. i like your style. this is a good poem because you have to take a second to think about it. that makes a big difference! |
Great poem keep writing and ill keep reading. xxx so sad but so well expressed i can feel the pain as i read it :( |
Very emotional write. It is also original, in my view. Nicely done. |