Very emotional write. It is also original, in my view. Nicely done.

Great poem keep writing and ill keep reading. xxx so sad but so well expressed i can feel the pain as i read it :(

please could you comment on some of my poems much appreciated xxx alex xxx

Very good. i like your style. this is a good poem because you have to take a second to think about it. that makes a big difference!

p.s.: thanx for all your wonderful comments. I will return the favor!

That is a great poem! I love how you use emotion!
keep it up!