Another Night, Another Dawn.

by Asingletear   Oct 8, 2006


Another night, another dawn,
Another stretch and another yawn.

Wishing today will be the last,
Wishing it would just go fast.

Life's just stuck in a rut,
Life's experiences causing cuts.

Now the time has come to rest,
Now i have the final test.

No more time left to obtain,
No more- finally no more pain!

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K this aint very good, but please can someone give me some feedback, and ideas to change it please. x

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jackielynn

    I can feel your pain....love it

  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Great poem keep writing and ill keep reading. xxx so sad but so well expressed i can feel the pain as i read it :(

    please could you comment on some of my poems much appreciated xxx alex xxx

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