Aww that poem was so sad!!!
I loved it, i think your awesome at writing poems!! keep it up!!!!
~jessie~

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Well I've been here and I could relate to the poem.
Well but together and written but I think you should use correct spelling.
Just ann opinion. Good writing though.

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That was supa cool. you are awesome at rhyming. I wish I could ryme at all. Keep it up

I agree with Bryan this was a 5 people expanded your narrow minds and look into this woman`s heart and soul read the words. Great job 5/5. i wish that I could rate this higher for you.
Drew

Wow! this poem is soo sad. but i still loved it! i loed the end stanza "but its over now anyway and theres no more tears to cry,
so i hope you satisfied with the reason i died." i know its the sadest part of the poem and its really weird that i love it but it is so well written! :) great job!!

sophie:)

ps. thanx 4 the comment:)

Bravo! This poem reminds me so much of the relationship that I just got out of. You took the words right out of my mouth. You gave the perfect description of a heart broken girl/women. 5/5 Keep up the excellent work.

Love
Letty

This is a really great poem:) I hope itsjust letting you steam out and your not serious, your a really great poet,im sure there not worth it!

U wanted me to comment on ur poems nd dis is rele gd ur a gr8 writer xx comment on sum more of mine plez
:-) x x x

Sad and touching write.. beautifully written, keep up the great work 5/5

~[AnotherDream]~

Sick ass poem. Cool ending, but i feel the depth and sadness of the truth.

By the way... I wrote a new piece called, "To Good To Be True"

Tell me what you think! thanks!

This poem has a good meaning, but the flow is a little off in some place. An example of this is in this line:

and this is the thanks i get for it,

if you added another syllable you could easily improve the flow... ex:

and this is the thanks i get in return

but I do see the meaning and it does tell a story so all in all this is a good poem

nice work!

Oh my god!!! This is such a sad poem!! So much emotian is in it! A very touching read! Keep it up! xx

Wow! Very strong and very sad! 5/5 Keep up the great work. Great job on this one!

Innoc3ntStar

I think that this poem was sad and that it belongs in the sad catagory. Also you need to check your grammer. You need to place question marks in the end of the appropiate sentence and so on. Also you should break it up so that it can be easier for the reader to read. But other then that I think it was a very wonderful poem filled with sadness, bitterness, and anger. You have done a great job. 5/5

Letty

Yet another favourite.
It conveyed so much emotion and anger and hurt, and i liked the words and flow.
Another good job and another 5/5

I actually have tears in my eyes. You write with so much depth and emotion. Your poems are so meaningful. You go through a lot.

I'm honoured to be able to read your works of art.

Josie