by nata Oct 8, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
A mouth to talk but no words to say |
Interesting poem, i can relate, not enough emotion, but reallly good attempt... 4/5 |
by syarah
I like ur poem, but u need 2 put more periods and cammas.You have 2 many fun on sentences.But besides that i likes it.3/5 |