by The Angel of Secrets Oct 8, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
Teasing and mocking, you to me, |
This was unique and i liked that, the word flow was exellent wow keep this up xxx alex xxx (3) |
by Kristina
Aww very sad but great poem. you did a wonderful job on it. it flowed so nicely and the rhyming was good. keep writing! 5/5 |
by Letty
Excellent write! This poem is very deep and full of emotion. 5/5 Keep up the good work |