I like it its really good keep up the good work

That was good. don't stop writing.
~sarah~

I lik the rolll, try more detail theres nothing to touch or fel here...try color and what nto but i rly liek it keep it up.

lissa

I love it u put ur hart n 2 it

I love it

Hey i like it... its pretty good. love poems are the shit. keep it up

Awww thats cute

Pretty cool! I liked it a lot. =) Keep up with the writing!

~~Spanish367

Nice...
plenty of emotion and great use of words.
i like how you can rhyme and it doesnt make it corny.

5/5

Nice work. Very simple. works well... maybe more detail would make it more appealing and make it easier for the reader to get a visual image of the words,. xoxo God poem but.

I love it! it is so pretty

you did an awsome job!!