by Goran Rahim
Oh this is a sad one, but written greatly by a great poet... |
by blueknight
Wow What a powerful Poem and extremly sad You penned it beautifully very well written I can Add Anything this is great at all |
by ALEX
Amazing. and sad. dreadfully sad... and yet, so many people can relate. |
Yes this reminds me of me a few months ago and i just realised what Ana is shortened for ... anywayz beautiful poem and you deserve the 5 i gave you xxx |
This is a powerfully moving dark poem about an eating disorder ..great work |
by X2892
Hey, this poem was very good i give u a 5/5 |
by Robie Lincer
This is a nice poem! |
by Sweet lig
Wow i felt sad....very touching poem! i can relate at the same time i feel the sadness. very nice job i love it 5/5 |
by Tammie
Aw thats so sad. It flowed smoothly, and it made me sad thinking about it. You wrote it perfectly. Great job. =] 5/5 Definately. |
by Kristina
This is a good poem. but in one stanza you say "You have finally won the battle" and then at the end "This battle I did win...." so that confuses me a little. but other then that the poem was wonderful. so sad, but greatly written. keep it up! 5/5 |
This is a great peom, i liked the way you wrote it. very heartbreaking, but inspirable (sp!) at the same time! all in all: WONDERFULYY WRITTING!! |
by Amy
Wow..just wow |
Wow... thats amazing. I can relate to it perfectly. I just got out of rehab for Ana. It's nice to see somebody is going through the same things as me. 5/5 |
by lissy
Now that was really sad well now what alot of ppl who have read this all of my friends they say that ana should die |
I can understand why people have all given you a perfect 5/5 :) There was only one problem I found: |
by Flaminia
This poem really made me sick...in the good poetic sense...I immagined myself infront of the mirror...I've nearly passed through all of this...it's really scary...beautiful poem,except for the end:being thin and dead,you didn't win.And the mirror will always show you fat,no matter how thin you are. |
by Suri dawn
This is sad but well-written!I have won the battle against Ana in a different way.I made her disappear.I may not be as skinny as I want but at least I am not trapped in her chains anymore.Great job on this!Keep writing! |
by xxLivxx
This is amazing... |
Hmmm thaTS powerfull |
by JUSTMEXXX
Wow!!!!!!! 5/5!!!!!!!!!!! |