Wow, nice job!!! I hope everything will be ok for you and you can get away from this disorder. take care and great poem!!
luv, 6th Trinity

Wow!!So much motion going on i love it.
So much meanign has been put into this poem your a great writer.
I love it. Great work.
xoxroxyxox

Wonderful poem, sad but written well. Your a great writter, keep it up 5/5

Sarah!

Very nice (well not literally). Unfortunately ppl can relate. Not GoOD!! lol. I hope to read more of your poems and please read mine I just JOineD!! Lol

Wow.. You have real talent.. Keep up the good work!!

Wow~ powerful. That got to me. excellent poem 5/5 somthing to reltae too. teak xx

So sad but extremely well written. The only thing I'd say is to work on the flow a bit. Other than that, a touching poem. 5/5

Wow this is amazing. anorexia is a battle that can take over you i know how hard it is. i hope you are getting better. great poem 5/5

Its a sad poems but good,keep writing!

Great poem all though you should have done it for your self.

I know theres chocolate called Simply Delicious but u kicked out the chocolate in this poem and made in Simply Amazing....if you know what i mean lol!

Aww hunny. I don't know if this is true, or even who Ana is, but this poem really did touch me. It reminded me of my friend that almost died from Anarexia. You don't have to be thin to look good. If you ever need someone to talk to, I'll be here. =)

The poem...

[Thinking about what you did
How you ripped apart my soul
Now look at me in the casket, Ana
{My body so deadly pale and cold}]
^^Suggestion: {My body so pale and cold} I just thought it might even out the flow a little better, because it seemed forced to me.

The emotion however in it, was good. It could be improved if you went deeper into what exactly you were feeling, but it was good to me. Great write. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Another good one, i liked it alot... 5/5

I have had a few comments asking me if im ok wel, yes in great, and im NOT ana. thankyou for your comments though.

WOW! It took me the second stanza to realize Ana stood for anorexia! Really nice poem, vivid picture you painted with your words were so.............loss for words............wow!

-Annmaire

Convinced me that Im to fat to eat
it should be 'that Im too fat to eat'

But other than that... it was Excellent. Grr you make me so jealous! I wish I could write like this... I will strive. Amazing rhyming! Amazing flow! Loved It!

Still makes me mad I can't give you higher than 5...

I liked this poem. It's quite sad, and at the same time it helps the reader to understand this eating disorder better. You described how anorexia affected your body and your mind so badly. And how you lost control over you because of it.

I think my favorite part is the ending, it's a nice one. Made me think a little about it. =)

I hope you're feeling better by now.

Good job! 5/5

XoXo
Gaby

I noticed a few times you used 'to' when it should be 'too'. You also haven't used apostrophes where needed.

Apart from that, this poem was heartbreaking, but beautiful. Excellent write.

Omg wow, that was amazing! you have an amazing, heartwrenching talent! wonderful job 5/5

That's so sad, yet such a great poem!

you shouldn't have starved yourself! that's dangerous!!!!