Brutal honesty and you showed an intense perspective. Excellent work.

~jas~

Interesting poem. I think that this "Ana" can be described a bit more and the topic too. Keep it up

A powerful poem & I'm sure many can relate to the sadness felt within the poem. The flow was flawless, emotions were clear and strong, and the descriptions were vivid.

"Look at my body now, Ana
Bones stick through my skin
You have finally won the battle
When all I wanted was to be thin

You thought that you owned me
You took control and I admitted defeat
The voices brought with you in my head
Convinced me that Im to fat to eat"

^ My favorite stanzas, you really do have a way with words. Fantastic job, keep writing! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

It was very emotional, very powerful, very sad. I can really relate to it.. *hugs you* Wonderfully writtern. And I was curious if this was about you? Anyhow, keep up the good work. 5/5 definitely.
-Ally

Such a sad poem, very well written... it's sad that this really does happen. The poem is beautifully written though. You are very talented... 5/5. Keep writing always!

I have one word to say WOW! this poem is very deep and very emotional. you really were able to connect with the reader and make the story real for them AWESOME JOB