Shades of Black [Quadruple Senryu]

by aDORKable x3   Oct 8, 2006


Shades Of Black
Running Down From Her Eyes
Crying So Softly

Shades Of Black
Something That She Hides
She Is So Afraid To Show

Shades Of Black
Mixed In With Crimson Blood Red
The Pain Is Released

Shades Of Black
No Longer Their Problem Girl
Now Only A Soul

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A Senryu has the same structure as a Haiku, (A poem with a syllable count of 5/7/5) but instead of the focus being on nature, it is on human emotions. This is usually only one stanza, but it may have more.

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  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Ooh very good job...i dont really care for poetry that doesnt rhyme but i like this one...

    keep up the good work

    btw...u entered my contest so i decided id still give u a reward for trying =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Oooh! Girl, I haven't read your stuff in a longgg time!!

    I loved thisssss. I don't know what to say...lol Keep it up!!! take care,

    - Poetess // Glendaliz

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