Omg...this is such an amazing poem!..
Sad, yet powerful..

Hey this is a really really good poem i like it alot!!

Wow that was a really good poem. I loved it, there arent that many ppl out there who can make a poem mean something. YOU did and that you can be proud of. that is something that deserves respect! always
LostButterfly

WOW! i am not a political person, and remain neutral in all things. It's good to see someone who can see through the curtains they try to pull over people's faces. It's a crazy world, and though I don't think killing yourself is the answer, it is easy to see why living here isn't easy. Your last stanza was very powerful!
Charisma*

Ii really like this,
no offence too usa but they seem like they only care bout them selfs,
and they try to make peace with countrys that need their help instead of going too war with them.
its pathectic.
anways gud poem
=]
xx

I really like this poem. It's written well and it compares a lot of things. Keep up the good job 5/5

THis is really good!!!

This is an excellent write.... many truths within your words, powerful statements made. It flows well, some stanzas rhyme, others don't, but it doesn't stop the flow. Well done!

Excellent Poem
So very True..
Very Powerful..
Nice Flow..
Just Great!

Keep Smiling

Very deep and excellently written, I enjoyed in whole piece. You have very powerful message behind your words and you picked great topic to write about.
My favorite stanza is:
-They say they're fighting terror
just like angels with their guns.
They're at war to bring us peace
that is never going to come.-

Great job!
Keep writing

I understand completely.
i feel liek this all the time. .
&& in this world we call our home. .
itz been corrupted.
by people. by lies.
everyone wishes for peace. but will that ever come.
no one knowz. .
but. for some reason. i kind of dont wish for peace.
i mean. it would be nice to have it.
but letz face. itz never gonna be a reality. "/

5/5. :]]

Wow you know this is really good
it 's a very deep and emotional poem , and I like that it's not about boys like most poems (also mine actually.. hehe :p) :) It's really a poem you have to read a lot until you get the clue , but that's agood thing I think. I really like this, I'm curious to read your other poems and I'll definitally will. You seem like an amzing writer
<S return the favor?
x x

Its a really good poem...i like it a lot it had a really good flow to it. 5/5

I really like your topics. It's really sad the way things are going today with our world.
I'm not going to mention how great the poem flows because you manage to keep the "flow flowing" through all your work.
5/5

Okay...I don't even know what to say...this poem left me speechless.and that's a hard thing for anyone to do...
This, is such a heartfelt and beautifully written piece...every line was filled with so much truth, and the ending is like a slap in the face to the reader...beautiful.

Very powerful and so true! I got really mad the other day and wrote a poem that's like this. Check it out. Please comment and vote!

5/5 all i can say is WOW!!!!=]
sweetness

WOW WOW WOW WOW KEEP ON WRITING WOW VERY TOUCHING

Best if read while listening to the Star Wars theme

Complimentary link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TIqRlubnkjA