by DaddysLittleDefect Oct 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
[C]limb up on that stage. It'ds opening night of this self-proclaimed play. An "improv" act, if you will. Wait 'til all eyes are on you before you pull out that gun. Ready? Slowly now, no need to hurry. Make sure the safety is |
by Donna
I dont usually like poems like this, but wow, u changed my view with this one. i really loved it and that last line, so powerful! |
by NearlyCrazy6
Wow. awesome peice of work...but i dont really think its a poem. oh well, whatever it is its really really good! |
I liked how u wrotr this poem....very inique....keep on writing.... |
by Jenni Marie
I found this to be original and unique in concept. |
Very powerful and unique, I like it from the beginning to the end, truly interesting. It has effective atmosphere through the whole piece, and the ending is just... wow... mind-blowing. |