This is nice. I kinda wouldn't consider it as a poem though.

Wow I can feel the pain I LOVE IT!

Always
Outsider

This is a really good poem, I have read a few of your others too. You are really very good! 5/5 for sure. Please check out my poems and let me know what you think...thank you
Burning~Wings

Wow....wow...wow dang thats all i can say graphic poem nice i like it!!!

Wow! It's almost a story and not a poem. I'm not for suicide, but what a way to keep the reader on the edge of their seat. Your last line about no encore tonight was brilliant. I am speechless!
Charisma*

I REALLY REALLY LIKED THIS......ITS KINDA LIKE HER VOICE INSIDE OF HER HEAD TELLING HER TO DO THAT NICE JOB ON THE WRITING

This is different, but I like it. It's written well. Good job. Reminds me of a song from DDG. Anyways, it's very good. I write a few things like this as well. 5/5

Free write; long lines. Very impressive.
I love the [E]ncore tonight. That really stunned me. I was expecting something much longer.
It's good though, to take the reader my suprise.
Yet another story, metaphor, and web of emotions I enjoyed.
I love this difference.

5/5

Wow.
Different style of writing but i like it, its very well written, nice vocabulary.
Loved the ending
Overall Nice work

Keep SMiling =)

Very powerful and unique, I like it from the beginning to the end, truly interesting. It has effective atmosphere through the whole piece, and the ending is just... wow... mind-blowing.
Keep up!

I found this to be original and unique in concept.
The flow is perfect all the way throughout the piece.
Usually I'm not a fan of non rhyme but holy **** did I enjoy this piece.
The last line...wow. So much intensity and power...nicely done.

I liked how u wrotr this poem....very inique....keep on writing....

Wow. awesome peice of work...but i dont really think its a poem. oh well, whatever it is its really really good!

I dont usually like poems like this, but wow, u changed my view with this one. i really loved it and that last line, so powerful!

great job