by X2892 Oct 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I opened the doors, |
by Fsams
Very heartfelt poem. I like the total poem and |
by Cella Bella
Wow, this is so sad and pretty depressing and I could feel the pain. You write with such emotion. Amazing write! 5/5 |
by Brook
This is good. Once again, different, but i like the way you write. Maybe you could try not breaking the poem up so much though? it might flow better. 5/5 still |
by Tricky Daze
I dunno why you are that sad,but really good at expressing it,liked it.... |
by Ashley Ann
Oooh yeah! Now that is a poem with emotion! :D 5/5 5/5 5/5 5 friggen 5! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D GREAT JOB! |