Aww wow this is a very sad poem. but i can defiantly relate to it. only i left him but i still have a broken heart. funny how that worked out, eh? anyway.. wonderful job on this. it was full of emotion and flowed nicely. keep it up! 5/5

~Kristina

Thats a nice poem! very sad!
and you really know how to put creativity in your poem!
loved it!

Thanks for the comment on my poems it means alot to me

Wow, a very sad poem, but written nicely, i can feel the emotions in it, as i went through the same in life, keep up the great work and a 5/5 from me.

Very sad. You put a lot of emotion into the poem and it turned out amazingly. Great work.

Great write! The emotion is so intense throughout this piece-You really desplay to the reader how you're feeling---The only errors I found were grammatical, but minor...5/5

Oooh yeah! Now that is a poem with emotion! :D 5/5 5/5 5/5 5 friggen 5! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D GREAT JOB!

I dunno why you are that sad,but really good at expressing it,liked it....

This is good. Once again, different, but i like the way you write. Maybe you could try not breaking the poem up so much though? it might flow better. 5/5 still
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Wow, this is so sad and pretty depressing and I could feel the pain. You write with such emotion. Amazing write! 5/5

marcella

Very heartfelt poem. I like the total poem and
how yu have structured it. You managed to express the feelings very well. Keep ity up 5/5