Wonderful poem but the rhyming is off in many places. "Every woman who loved me; I took for an actress.", "Rest of the day, I drearily dread on.", and, "Time! Time that turns; waylays death mischief" do not fit their stanza's rhyming ending. Also, the three lines:

Cramping fears, taught me the ways of the wise
Nasty surprises, told me to be wary of advise
Bawdy Betrayals, made me wear a guise.

They end with "ise" and the rest of the stanza ends with "ice". It splits the stanza in two.

However, I love the purpose and subject of the poem. Keep up the great ideas!

xxEvilAngelxx

Actually, Nasty surprises, told me to be wary of advise, does fit, ignore my saying of that. =D

xxEvilAngelxx

This is a very nice poem. By far, one of the best I've read on here. Your emotions are so vivid. I feel your anger, your sadness. Yet there isn't a sense of dragging hostility towards anyone in the poem. Makes out for a wonderful piece.

Holy, that is one awesome masterpiece, beautiful poem, powerful vocabs, there's no more I need to say..

Interesting piece.

Excellent piece
master piece infact

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