Love and Hate Line

by catherine   Oct 9, 2006


The goul turned.
She saw his power.
The red of his eyes gleamed,
as he rushed toward her.

He stopped abruptly.
Just to look and see.
He looked deep into her eyes,
And saw that she was free.

Something rushed over him.
A shiver down his ragged spine,
He could not breath,
The love and hate line.

He was not who he usually was.
This was unheard.
It was peculliar and shameful.
His anger was cured.

She once again,
Looked deep into his eyes.
But something had changed.
Herself she was beside.

There was suddenly love,
A spark of lightening.
It was a new start,
A new begining.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    O.o Thanks.

    I'm confused. did you mean confused rhyming on mine- or yours? or... did you mean something else all together? Hahaha... Well if you meant on my poem... I probably meant to do that.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Aww. Very pretty.
    Keep up the good work... or something.. haha..
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Very Good! Nice story :) kept me hooked the whole Time! Great Rhyming!! my favorite part:
    Something rushed over him.
    A shiver down his ragged spine,
    He could not breath,
    The love and hate line.
    Great Job!
    5/5

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