Is that me?

by kida   Oct 9, 2006


I was walking through the woods today and saw a puddle of blood,
a puddle shining bright red, caused by unriquiented love
i walked a little faster to escape the sight
i ran along the twisted path as it changed from day to night

darkness surrounds me, leaves crunch under my feet
untill i reach a clearing surrounded by flowers so sweet,
i peer into the circle filled with a strange dim light
what i see inside is a gahstly sight

a girl sits in the middle with blood pouring from her arm
Jumped from happiness to suicide no time for alarm
tears stream down her face as she thinks of what she has done
he took her hope her happiness and the life of her unborn son

she's laying on the ground now in a pool of her own blood
she's been hurt so many times she should have never fell in love
i turn around in shock coz finally i see
the woman lying on the ground, "oh my god, she's me!"

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    I changed my mind,, this is my favorite poem uve written, as i said ur a great writer,, i loved the ending:

    she's laying on the ground now in a pool of her own blood
    she's been hurt so many times she should have never fell in love
    i turn around in shock coz finally i see
    the woman lying on the ground, "oh my god, she's me!"

    perfect ending,,greatly penned,, definetly 5/5
    Janaynay

  • 17 years ago

    by Tite

    Yo dis is straight up 5/5. You killed dis poem. You described da scene very well and u just strait up murdered dis poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Tash

    Hey chiq its me... uv changed but i luv ur poems
    tash xo

  • 18 years ago

    by Marina

    This is really good, and i understand the loss of an unborn child, i... well... my boyfriend and i, wound up with me being pregnant, and about 2 months into my pregnancy i went for a check up, and they said that the baby, was none exsistante... and i had allreayd prepped my boyfrinen and myself for us to be haveing a baby... it was.. horrible, anyways, ... long story short, yes, i do cut myself, and yes it does help... but anwyays, yeah a lil big about me so eyah.. uhn, this is a beautoful poem, keep writing, and check out some of my new stuff.. thanks
    -Marina

  • 18 years ago

    by Kitty

    Iu loved this poem. its realli good. im sorri to hear what ur friend is goin thru n how shes blaming you, i kno exactly how tht feels. keep up th good work
    kitty xoxo

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