Seems a little sadistic...but i kinda like it. hehe. very intence though. maybe you could (in future) go into your feelings about him. and why he would never love you? i still love it though =D

ben

This is a great poem. and ben is right you could so do that. 4/5

"I doubt I would do all these things - because even if I did, it wouldn't make you love me instead of her."

I LOVED that part, it was totally awesome, it ended things in a sad emotion-filled level, and it was great! Hope to read more of your poems. *hugz*