Comments : Song of darkness

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    This has got to be one of my favorites of yours. Absolutely beautifully done.
    The flow was without flaw and such a wonderful imagery.

    But you, my friend, you see it,
    as you cling to things you know,
    (how the sunlight always finds you,
    how the shadows come and go)

    Wonderful stanza. My favorite in a exquisite write.

    Happiness
    Jeannie

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Excellent job. Great use of deep voice and message. Amazing transition