28th September

by Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast   Oct 9, 2006


- 28th September -

This girl has big problems,
But nobody wants to care,
She has major issues,
But nobodys there

She cries her acid tears,
Every night before bed,
Her acid tears are drying up,
But her problems are still there,

To make her worries disappear,
Just for a short minute,
She causes self-harm,
All the way to the limit,

On the bathroom floor,
In a corner,
She lays so helpless,
Just like a loner,

Its the 28th,
And theres a knock,
On the bathroom door,
Her mum is yelling and screaming,
And finds her daughter bleeding,

The girl whispersâ?¦
Never meant to hurt you,
Didnt meant to lie,
I love you mum,
Please donâ??t let me die!

Two months from then,
Shes all live and well,
This poor girl,
Shes been through hell,

But what happen on the 28th,
Slowly starts to be forgotten,
The familys memory has shorten,

But this girl didnt forget,
Its all still in her head,
Her wounds did not mend,

The fights begin again,
Shes having big problems,
But nobody wants to care,
Shes having major issues,
But nobodys there,

So its the 28th again,
Her 2month anniversary,
But nobody can remember,
Or is there to say its September,

Shes given up the fight,
Shes given up her guard,
She cant wait for the day,
Its way too hard,

Shes had enough,
She wants to leave,
Locks the door,
And starts to bleed,
But this time,
Nobodys home,
She begins to cry...
She starts to die...

-Comments, please. I always return the Fava =] -

© Copyright 2006 By: Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast

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  • 17 years ago

    by CE

    Blown away by this one....VERY DEEP! I LOVE IT!

  • 18 years ago

    by robin milford

    Cool poem I like. keep writing. Thanks for comment on
    "Bleeding on the inside".

  • 18 years ago

    by somehow broken

    Yeah i agree with the above ur an amazing writer. the poem is deep and has alot of stuff i can relate to. keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Savanha

    Of course i like it... duh. lol
    well, i really like ur writing, and think you should write more. it may be the topic you are writing about, but im really into it. keep writing. and let me know if you need to talk. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    Absolutely amazing! you're one of my favorite poets, and this is only the third poem of yours that I've read. (*hint hint* add more ;) ).

    this reminds me almost of a song, and the stanza about big problems and major issues could be the chorus. if you put just a little more time into this, this could very well be a song.

    regardless, an absolutely amazing poem, and one that I loved.

    Don't stop writing, I love your stuff