THe Moon and Ocean [Sonnet]

by Whitey   Oct 9, 2006


The ocean of my spirit rises - falls,
Its surface given form by motion deep.
Drowned in its troubled currents my heart calls;
Adrift, my mind is lulled to restless sleep.

In my night sky, a goddess weeps alone.
Her tears of silver light dance on a wave
That hides my heart from view, sunk like a stone
Locked deep beneath the surface in a cave.

Her pain she shapes into a song of love,
Which calms my spirit, makes its waters clear,
Allows her light to stream down from above,
Shine on my heart, and gently draw it near.

Thus pain to pain may speak, perchance be heard,
And make love something more than just a word.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    I wanted to give some great advice,but I truly think it is absolutely beautiful just the way it is .I loved it.

  • 18 years ago

    by sibyllene

    Whaha! way to write a sonnet!
    as usual, great rhythm, and (even better) great significance in the words you used!

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Oh goodness. You know how to write a sonnet. I love sonnets and this may have just made me love them more. Keep it up. =] 5/5

    -Jenna.

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Ah..such magnificent arrays of thought provoking words in lovely knitted lines of a poem.
    A 5/5 for sure and deserving.

    God Bless!