by mimzy Oct 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Silent girl, in the dark |
Amazing write. Your repetition of "little girl" send chills up my spine. Great poem. |
by Letty
This is a very sad poem. You painted such a very sad picture with your words and I'm sure that is the affect that you were trying to make. I really enjoyed reading this poem. As they say a picture is worth a thousand words and yours has said it all. Keep up the excellent work. 5/5 |