"I feel no hate"

I wish i could say i feel no hate but after the poem you just commented of mine, i can't say that, lol.

But being serious, this poem was very heartfelt and very emotive. Well done.
5/5
*Gem*

Just wanted to say thanks for your very kind words for 'the mermaid' and 'Kitty and his crew'. Unfortunately I can't read this poem right now, due to being tird and not having much time. Do you know/like Paolo Nuttini? I just came back from a very inimate Paolo Nuttini gig, hense the 'being tired' thing.

Brad

P.S. I promise I'll be back to read your poem.

I told you I'd be back. I like what the poem was about, but I feel that way you told the story could have been improved. I think, when someone wants to get a personal story across so much, that they don't concentrate on the poem, but just the story. I think the poem should come first and then the story. Sorry if you feel I've called it a bad poem cause that's not my intention. I just wanted to tell you the truth, which very few people actually do on this site.

Brad

P.S. Thanks for your comment on 'Kitty and his Crew', I appreciate all comments - good or bad.

I told you I'd be back. I like what the poem was about, but I feel that way you told the story could have been improved. I think, when someone wants to get a personal story across so much, that they don't concentrate on the poem, but just the story. I think the poem should come first and then the story. Sorry if you feel I've called it a bad poem cause that's not my intention. I just wanted to tell you the truth, which very few people actually do on this site.

Brad

P.S. Thanks for your comment on 'Kitty and his Crew', I appreciate all comments - good or bad.

Its soo sad yet i can relate, its very well writen and i hung on every word :) if you need someone to talk to drop me a line, keep writing for i shall keep reading :)

Awesome poem kelly!

you really give the reader a sense of what you went through and are feeling.

i wish you the best of luck in the future... in all aspects of your life, and i hope that you find a man who appreciates you for who you are.

keep up the good work!

That gives people cause to stare.
they go in clusters to whisper,
talk as if i am not even there.

i can totally relate, although i ended up hating them all so much more than i would have ever liked.

Excellent poem very sad,and you are not alone,hell I'm alive and as long as I am you always have a friend to talk to,this was a very good poem ,full of heartache and pain great job my friend, 5/5