by BlueDreams Oct 9, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
It was late Friday night when we said goodbye |
by Letty
This is truly sad. The words really touched me. You have again penned a beautiful poem. Keep writing these beautiful poems. |
Awwwwwww beautiful writing =] its so real and I love poems like this. 5/5 |
by Loz
That is so beautiful |
This was an amazing write, the rhyming scheme was good throughout, tho got a bit forced towards the end, but maybe that was just me, i loved all the emotions that you placed carefully into this poem, im sorry if this is true, but i can totally relate to 'first love's ' being ruined. Inspiring peice, keep it up.. |
I thought it was really good, keep it up |