I miss you

by Jen   Oct 9, 2006


The words you used to whisper,
and how they made me smile,
your now a faded figure,
you always made me smile,
i cant find words to say,
how i miss you everyday.

you always talked sense into me,
and let me know i was in the wrong,
now i stand here alone,
some how not so strong.

i miss you so much,
words cannot explain,
how much you put me through,
the great amount of pain.

i feel alone and empty,
just waiting for your call,
but then im forgetting,
your not here anymore.

©
~*~Jen~*~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Carrence Verona

    I can ReLate into it.. i would LoVe to see youR next poEm.. youR a good wRiteR.. keep it up..

  • 18 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Awww sooo sad :(( i really enjoyed reading it :))

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Sorry Jen. I really, really wanted to like this poem, because you were so nice about mine. I liked most of the poem, in fact, the only fault for me, was the first stanza, because it was out of place (structure wise).

    Brad

    P.S. Thanks for your comment on my poem 'The mermaid' . I love to hear good things, although, critisim and advice is always welcome.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jen

    Awww yaaaay glad you all like my poems =)

    *~*Jen*~*

  • 18 years ago

    by journey

    Very Nice Jen. I Loved Your Poem

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